TriForce12's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jesus Loves you All child]

It's a video of Bible Illlustrations while the author fucks around with the saturation tool.
No entertainment value what so ever.

Blam it.

Boss responds:

you need to feel the spirit of the holy ghost inside of you to see the light

[mcnuggies.swf]

Completely non-sensical, lazy and, quite frankly, liquid retardation.
I think I lost IQ points watching this.

redrik009 responds:

Good.

[Revengineering]

Didn't enjoy it.

Mediocre animation and, in my opinion, not funny.
Or entertaining. Or enjoyable, to be frank.

You show promise, don't get me wrong.
I just don't see why this deserves the award and the front page.

daigonite responds:

Unfortunately this doesn't really tell me where I could get better, it simply tells me that you didn't like it.

As a note, this piece was not meant to be particularly humorous (with just a few small background moment jokes), so I apologize if that's what you were looking forward to.

Regardless, if you want me to get better, critique is always the way to go. I've already received a lot of good critique and I'm sure you could pinpoint exactly what you don't like about it, besides such ambiguous things as "mediocre animation" or "not entertaining or enjoyable".

[Sonic Hentai Porno sexy]

Good

Good animation, entertaining joke.

golfinho responds:

thanks man!

[Viagra For Kids]

Sigh

This had so much potential - good animation, decent style, amusing jokes, but the punchline (and it's voice acting) was terrible. That's the only reason this has bombed.

Sorry, bro

hairygiraffe responds:

yeah the punchline was a bit dumb and yeah the voice acting was pretty average that's why I need voice actors but I dont really know anyone who would have time for this.

[What's the Worst]

Ironic

Ironic - I had my eyelid ripped by a dog on saturday. How odd.

Overall, this was a poor film..

The comedy didn't make me laugh, the voice acting was poor, the animation was sub-par.

Try again, this time with a fresh and funny idea.

GotRedOnYou responds:

Some people are impossible to please, for 48 hours work, i'm afraid that this is good. to be amazing for you, you want walt disney quality....? Well your not going to find that on here chap. as for sub par animation, I'll take criticism from people who understand the animation process. Choose your harsh words carefully next time.

[RHG Demo - Lemon]

Sorry

I have to say I dont like it, but to be honest, this is basically what my first animation was.

Keep it up, try and improve.

Kqgqn responds:

I understand, you don't like it, but please notice, it's the first flash I EVER made! Thanks.
-Keegz

[Flash Gordon]

WTF?

The clock that starts singing "Nothing but a man, with a mans courage" kind of looks like a... clam. But I digress.

Substandard animation, but this is nearly always true of clock animations, but the concept, execution and overall humour was impressive. Congratulations, you've managed to make me laugh at a clock animation for the first time.

ScrewdriverClock responds:

Your flash portfolio consists of a few stolen game concepts and a shitty "Awesome" parody. I appreciate the 10 but you have no room to claim something is substandard.

[Moarphs: In and Out]

Mindfuck

10 for technichal skill, but you were treading on a thin line here between technical demo and random morphs... be careful next time, try to find some kind of story, and layer your morphs into that story... otherwise you could find yourselves getting bad votes for the lack of relevant material!

Good luck, and nice skills guys!

M-Shack responds:

thanks, but it was suppose to be random morphs tho. No story, no plot, just something you can sit and enjoy watching

[iGot No iPhone]

Brilliant!

This is really funny!
I think this track would make an awesome ringtone on any phone that isnt an iPhone, lol!

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

Yep.